Hard game, sore loser

4 thoughts on “Hard game, sore loser”

  1. There is lots of tension and I found myself holding my breath to see what was going to happen. Love the suspense! 🙂


    1. Thank you! I tried to make the description of a moment that lasted only for approx 10 min as precised as possible. Because that is how it is when we are about to hear something that we’re afraid of – it lasts forever.


  2. Great story. Tough on the couple. I feel sorry for them both. You describe the girl’s reaction so well. But what an insensitive co-worker. Or just cruel.
    Hate to say but some typos interrupted my first reading: descent/decent, dinning/dining, beat/beet.


    1. Thanks for the typos, nothing to apologize for – English is not my first language (which is not an excuse), but I did not proof-read my piece as I should have done! Thank you for the feedback! Love it and will be better next time!


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