Let’s say it’s a poem!

5 thoughts on “Let’s say it’s a poem!”

    1. Hello there, thank you! 🙂 As I said, it probably is the worst poetry you’ve ever read, but I tried… and that alone counts (blushing). And… sometimes, to get yourself back to where you belong – you need to take yourself out somewhere, where you feel like a total stranger, in this case it’s poetry for me.

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      1. It’s not the worst poetry I’ve read 😉 there are a couple moments (the beginning, the h-rhythm in the end) which I think worked well. But the rhyming seems to hold you back for now. Don’t be afraid of free verse or occasional rhyming 🙂

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